Light filtering through the gauze-like sky Silvery white against the black of trees The water calm on the surface of the lake Mist clearing too slowly in the cool of the breeze
The drilling of an early morning woodpecker In the distance was the only sound Surroundings reflective of what is most times bleak A monochrome life where happiness drowned
Living in grey tones of black mixed with white No clear definition or so it seems Waiting in shadows where the sun never shines No smiling faces Or technicolor dreams
Is it safer here? Where regret Does not call And one just exists Does the barometric pressure Suppress all hope Suffocating wishes In some ironic twist?
Closeted in darkness Innocuous to influences of disappointment Where pain cannot reach Will that light under a bushel Ever burn so bright? Lighting the way To an inevitable breach
I have been writing poetry since I was a child and it has helped in the good times and bad times. I am always looking within to find the answers to life's problems and to write thought-provoking poetry and prose.
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Christine
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34 thoughts on “Monochrome – Poem of the Month – May 2019”
Christine, this piece would also fit for the limbo prompt. It casts oppressive pall over a life that has become sterile in its safety, but with some contemplation for change letting a glimmer of light gleam from under the basket. Very well-done writing.
Thanks so much Lisa. Unfortunately there are people who prefer to hide away rather than stand in the sunshine and participate. They aren’t prepared to risk being hurt again. Sad really. 😢
A great take on the prompt.
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Thanks Sadje 🙂💕
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You’re welcome Christine
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Lovely poetry ❤️
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Thanks Paula 🙂
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Brilliant, Christine. That penultimate stana really got me for some reason.
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Thank you so much Sue. I really appreciate your comments 🙂💕
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Nice lines: “Does the barometric pressure
Suppress all hope
Suffocating wishes”
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Thank you Frank. Sometimes the barometric pressure does affect people in a negative way, 😢
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“A monochrome life
where happiness drowned”
The line is so beautifully magnified as the poem continues.
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Thank you Lillian 🙂
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Christine, this piece would also fit for the limbo prompt. It casts oppressive pall over a life that has become sterile in its safety, but with some contemplation for change letting a glimmer of light gleam from under the basket. Very well-done writing.
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Thanks so much Lisa. Unfortunately there are people who prefer to hide away rather than stand in the sunshine and participate. They aren’t prepared to risk being hurt again. Sad really. 😢
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I can just imagine this. I particularly like these lines:
Will that light under a bushel
Ever burn so bright?
Lighting the way
To an inevitable breach
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Thank you so much! I appreciate it 🙂
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Lovely poetry.
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Love your description of the monochrome life… Sounds like a life on Prozac!
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It did read like that didn’t it? Lol 🤣
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Yes, that is how it read to me!
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Well it was about a depressed person … 😢
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The greyness, is it safe, those eternal questions, uncertain, seeking.
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Yes Paul, I think many find it safe 😢
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Oh so heavy Christine. I did not think I would be able to stand out from under. Dark, but absolutely riveting. I couldn’t look away…
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Thanks Rob. One of my prompts that day was “I shot the Sherrif” what would you have written?🙂
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I think the state of a monochrome life is exactly like this… being drained into grey.
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Yes this is true. Mundane and colorless 😕
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magnificent metaphors…
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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As someone, who lives with chronic depression, I know this poem. all too well. It’s those small moments of brightness that makes life livable.
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Yes Teresa. I’m so sorry. May there be more sunshine in your life ❤️ Thank you for reading
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Good poem for the post.
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Thank you for reading 🙂
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my pleasure
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