I have been writing poetry since I was a child and it has helped in the good times and bad times. I am always looking within to find the answers to life's problems and to write thought-provoking poetry and prose.
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Christine
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13 thoughts on “Green Eyes”
Christine, you have captured the envy and sheer jealousy of the woman in the B&W photo. I don’t need color to know to watch my back around her. – Well done
“that grubby sack” is such a great phrase. I’m guessing that is baggage or envy here? If it was about a guy it would mean something else. The metaphor is excellent, Christine.
Christine, you have captured the envy and sheer jealousy of the woman in the B&W photo. I don’t need color to know to watch my back around her. – Well done
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Thanks so much Darnell. After I wrote the poem I found the picture and I thought she looked the part too! 🙂
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Just desserts!
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Yes, we had her number! 🙂👍
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👍
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“that grubby sack” is such a great phrase. I’m guessing that is baggage or envy here? If it was about a guy it would mean something else. The metaphor is excellent, Christine.
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Thanks Lisa! Yes, it is about a woman. I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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You are welcome.
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I love the last stanza. Proud self assurance and Boldly confident.
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Thanks Gina. Yes, she knew who she was dealing with 🙂
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Well done, Christine! The image is perfect, as well.
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Thank you! Much appreciated 🙂💕
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You’re welcome! 😊
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