
Alarm Call
He drills for food at break of dawn
Woodpecker’s schedule already drawn
Woken rudely from my reverie
Before I can barely release a yawn
A beautiful sight high on the oak tree
His red tuft bright and feathery
It’s a wonder his head doesn’t ache
If only he could work in a lower key
It must be a tough job for Woody
Does his beak ever get bloody?
Why doesn’t he dig for worms?
Then perhaps I wouldn’t be so moody
Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing ©
Frank is hosting at D'Verse Poets Pub and our challenge
tonight is covering the Rubaiyat.
Rhyme schemes
The original Persian rhyme schemes were AABA or AAAA.
I chose AABA for my attempt at this form.
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Woody is quite the character isn’t he. Nice job, Christine!
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Thanks Lisa. I noticed many responding to the challenge used birds as their muse, so I did too! 🙂
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pretty subject, love the woodpeckers tenacity and your rhyming was lovely!
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Thanks dear friend 🙂💕 I really love their wake up call.
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Love your subject matter. You have worked well with this form
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Thanks V.J. It was a light hearted attempt 🙂
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We all have to start somewhere….
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🙂
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It is a tough job for Woody. Love the sounds that they make though.
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Yes! They sound like machinery 🙂 I find it amazing!
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I enjoyed this poem and the questions you raised. You would think worms would be more easily accessable!
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I think they drill for insects 🙂 I guess they they don’t dig for earth worms.
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Yes, and the sapsuckers drill to drain sap out of the tree to drink!
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Amazing isn’t it? 🙂
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I’ve wondered the same thing about those woodpeckers that I’ve encountered: “It’s a wonder his head doesn’t ache”
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I think Nature took care of their anatomy so that doesn’t happen 🙂 Lol
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This was wonderful Christine. I love woodpeckers. When we lived in the Cascade foothills of Oregon, the big red crested Pileated’s were always pecking at the giant old-growth conifers that surrounded our house. And always seemed they were in pairs. I enjoyed reading this and the phito was great! I got inspired by Frank’s rubaiyat thing and posted two – one dark, one light. Both of mine follow Frost’s 8-syllable line format.
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Thanks Rob! Yes, they are fascinating birds and always fun to hear them drilling. Although not at 6 am 😑 I’ll check out your poems now. 💕☺️
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Fun poem, Christine. Woodpeckers are amazing. A wonder how they keep their head on.
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Yes, amazing little creatures. 💕🙂 Thanks Jordy
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Beautiful! I watch them gather in my tree every morning. In addition to the Gila woodpeckers, I am also seeing Northern Flickers.
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How beautiful! You are lucky 👍💕
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Yes, truly blessed. 🙂
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Hah! You have me smiling with this one! Good question…..my guess would be that woodpeckers get giant head aches! Perhaps we should pitch this image and idea for a commercial for Advil??? 🙂
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I live that idea! Very funny 🙂
Thanks for reading Lillian
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Fun piece… mr Woody can be quit a nuisance I think
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Thank you 🙂
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Love it! 🙂
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Thanks so much Bette 💕
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A nice light- hearted approach to the prompt. I see one once in awhile in my back yard. Interesting to watch but yes, not the best alarm clock to wake up to.
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Thanks Mish. I really appreciate it. 🙂
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